Thursday, October 17, 2019

Week 9 Story


Heartbroken Man
There once was a man named Jason that lived in a small village. He was a very wise and powerful man that gave the people of his village powerful blessings. Eventually the people of the village grew jealous of his wondrous gift that he had and came to imprison him so they could get blessings whenever they wanted. The man heard of this and decided to leave the village and take his son through the forest in search of a better village, one that would appreciate what he did for them. While the man was out on a walk through the forest when he came across his son, a lion, a goose, and an ox that were in a net hanging from the tree.
Jason thought to himself, “I need to rescue my son the others I will leave in the tree, they are of no use to me.”
When he told his son that he would be up to get him the other animals pleaded to him asking him to please save them and that he would be richly rewarded. The lion said that he would be his protector and would make sure no harm ever befell him. The goose promised him golden eggs and the ox promised him to work for him in his field for as long as he needed. Jason agreed and went up the tree and cut everyone down and they all made their way to the next village. When Jason made himself at home in the new village he started blessing the people of this village. He too was blessed by the deeds which the animals did for him. They all kept their promise and he was made quite wealthy. One day the king saw him as a threat and wanted him gone but couldn’t figure out a way to capture the man. Jason’s son decided that he too wanted to be wealthy and told the king he would let him in the house to capture his father. When the King heard this he was quite pleased.
So, in the dead of night the king came for him and was let in by Jason’s son. As the guards that were with the king piled into the house they were met with a most ferocious foe. The lion jumped upon them and in a few short moments had killed all but the king. Jason woke up and jumped out of bed to see what the matter was. He saw the king lying on the floor with the lion on top growling.
Jason asked the king, “What are you doing in my house? Who let you in here?”
Sputtering the man said, “It was your son he let us all in to take you. We promised him many riches for doing so.”
Jason looked at the man, then at his son and said, “Leave while I allow it, both of you.”
Though Jason had all the blessings and wealth he was never to be happy again. He had lost everything that truly mattered to him, his son.

Author’s Note: I decided to combine two stories. I combined a story about Anansi in which he gives out wisdom to the people only for them to begrudge him. He decides to take all the wisdom back and hide it from them. In the process of hiding it his son tells him a better way to climb the tree so that he might hide it. He decides he doesn’t have all the wisdom and decides to get rid of his plan. I incorporated the son but changed him from being good to being evil. I also made it to where it was blessings instead of wisdom. The other story I mixed in was the story called the Ungrateful Man which is about a hunter who finds several different things in a whole. He saves them and all of them bestow him with a gift for his deed. All except the man who ends up lying to the king telling him that it was hunter who stole from him. After being imprisoned he cures the king’s son using one of the gifts he received. In my story I decided to incorporate him saving a few animals that would bless him, but made his son the ungrateful man in my story.
Bibliography: West African Folktales by William H. Barker and Cecilia Sinclair 
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6 comments:

  1. Hey Dallas!

    I love that you've taken two stories and combined them into your own unique tale! I also recently experimented with combining two stories and found it to be a wonderful challenge to see how I could incorporate elements of both. The idea of the son turning from good to evil also added a nice element of intrigue. Well done!

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  2. Hey Dallas!

    This was a fascinating story. Jason was a great character, showing both power and emotional depth. I enjoyed the way you wrote this narrative, and was even more impressed when I read the author's note and realized how you combined two other tales to make this one! The ending was well-done and made me feel sad for Jason. Nicely done, keep up the great work!

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  3. Hi Dallas! Your story was very powerful!! It is very sad that the boy's dad did everything in his power to keep him safe and then he offered up his dad in exchange for riches. It was cool that the animals stood with Jason and actually did follow through on their promises, but it sucks that the one person Jason cared about was the person that betrayed him...

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  4. Hi Dallas!
    What a powerful story! It is so sad yet sweet at the same time. I really love the character development of the dad. I think it’s awesome that you decided to combine two different stories when recreating this! That is something that is so impressive and you really did an amazing job! Overall, I really enjoyed this story, good job!

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  5. Hi Dallas!
    I think you did a great job of making your own story out of the two you started with. I felt like your story really made sense and you made the two stories fit really nicely together. My only suggestion would be to break up the text into another paragraph or two so it is easier to read.

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  6. Hi Dallas! I love the idea of combining two different stories! It seems like such an obvious idea but I hadn't even considered it. I'm glad you went into more detail about the two stories in your author's note so that the readers could get a better grasp on what you changed and how you intertwined the stories. Great job!

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